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 # Quickstart: Use Visual Studio to create your first ASP.NET Core web service in F#
 
-In this 5-10 minute introduction to the Visual Studio integrated development environment (IDE), you'll create an F# ASP.NET Core web application.
+In this 5-10 minute introduction to F# in Visual Studio , you'll create an F# ASP.NET Core web application.
 
 If you haven't already installed Visual Studio, go to the [Visual Studio downloads](https://visualstudio.microsoft.com/downloads/?utm_medium=microsoft&utm_source=docs.microsoft.com&utm_campaign=button+cta&utm_content=download+vs2017) page to install it for free.
 
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 1. Open Visual Studio 2017.
 
-1. From the top menu bar, choose **File** > **New** > **Project**.
+2. From the top menu bar, choose **File** > **New** > **Project**.
 
-1. In the **New Project** dialog box, in the left pane, expand **Visual F#**, then choose **Web**. In the middle pane, choose **ASP.NET Core Web Application**, then choose **OK**.
+3. In the **New Project** dialog box, in the left pane, expand **Visual F#**, then choose **Web**. In the middle pane, choose **ASP.NET Core Web Application**, then choose **OK**.
 
      If you don't see the **.NET Core** project template category, choose the **Open Visual Studio Installer** link in the left pane. The Visual Studio Installer launches. Choose the **ASP.NET and web development** workload, then choose **Modify**.
 
      ![ASP.NET workload in VS Installer](../ide/media/quickstart-aspnet-workload.png)
 
-1. In the **New ASP.NET Core Web Application** dialog box, select **ASP.NET Core 2.1** from the top drop-down menu. (If you don't see **ASP.NET Core 2.1** in the list, install it by following the **Download** link that should appear in a yellow bar near the top of the dialog box.) Choose **OK**.
+4. In the **New ASP.NET Core Web Application** dialog box, select **ASP.NET Core 2.1** from the top drop-down menu. (If you don't see **ASP.NET Core 2.1** in the list, install it by following the **Download** link that should appear in a yellow bar near the top of the dialog box.) Choose **OK**.
 
 ## Explore the IDE
 
 1. In the **Solution Explorer** toolbar, expand the **Controllers** folder, then choose **ValuesController.fs** to open it in the editor.
 
-![Solution Explorer with Controllers folder expanded in F# Web API project](../ide/media/hello-world-fs-sln-explorer.png)
+   ![Solution Explorer with Controllers folder expanded in F# Web API project](../ide/media/hello-world-fs-sln-explorer.png)
 
 2. Next, modify the `Get()` member to be the following:
 
-```fsharp
-[<HttpGet>]
-member this.Get() =
-    let values = [|"Hello"; "World"; "First F#/ASP.NET Core web API!"|]
-    ActionResult<string[]>(values)
-```
+   ```fsharp
+   [<HttpGet>]
+   member this.Get() =
+       let values = [|"Hello"; "World"; "First F#/ASP.NET Core web API!"|]
+       ActionResult<string[]>(values)
+   ```
 
-The code is straightforward. An F# array of values is bound to the `values` name, and then passed to the ASP.NET Core MVC framework as an `ActionResult`. ASP.NET Core will take care of the rest for you.
+The code is straightforward. An F# array of values is bound to the `values` name, and then passed to the ASP.NET Core MVC framework as an `ActionResult`. ASP.NET Core takes care of the rest for you.
 
 It should look like this in the editor:
 
@@ -64,13 +64,13 @@ It should look like this in the editor:
 
 2. The page should navigate to the `/api/values` route, but if it does not, enter `https://localhost:44396/api/values` into your browser.
 
-The web browser will now display JSON values matching what you typed earlier.
+The web browser will now display JSON matching what you typed earlier.
 
 ## Next steps
 
 Congratulations on completing this Quickstart! We hope you learned a little bit about F#, ASP.NET Core, and the Visual Studio IDE. To see the app running on a public server, select the following button.
 
 > [!div class="nextstepaction"]
-> [Deploy the app to Azure App Service](..//deployment/quickstart-deploy-to-azure.md)
+> [Deploy the app to Azure App Service](../deployment/quickstart-deploy-to-azure.md)
 
 To learn more about F#, check out the official [F# Guide](/dotnet/fsharp/index).