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MTV-1719: Selecting a migration network for a CNV destination provider #596

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@RichardHoch RichardHoch requested a review from sgratch December 2, 2024 15:56
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@sgratch Please review this PR. It corrects incorrect information in the documentation.

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lgtm

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@anarnold97 I made the change you suggested, but the line spacing looks off to me. It might be a template issue. What do you think?
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@RichardHoch RichardHoch force-pushed the cnv_dest_provider_mig_network branch 3 times, most recently from f2dd6fd to 6d032dd Compare December 15, 2024 14:04
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= Adding a migration hook to a migration plan

You can a migration hook to an existing migration plan. Although you can complete part of the procedure for adding the hook to migration plan by using either the CLI or UI, one step must be done using the CLi.
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You can a migration hook to an existing migration plan. Although you can complete part of the procedure for adding the hook to migration plan by using either the CLI or UI, one step must be done using the CLi.
You can add a migration hook to an existing migration plan. Although, you can complete part of the procedure for adding the hook to a migration plan by using either the CLI or UI. However, one step must always be completed using the CLI.

Bit of mess. LOL

* Migration plan
* Migration hook image or file (discuss)
* File containing the `Secret` for the source provider
* {ocp} service account that has at least Write-access permission for the namespace you are working in
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* {ocp} service account that has at least Write-access permission for the namespace you are working in
* {ocp} service account that has at least *write access* permission for the namespace you are working in

Looking at vmware-prerequisites.adoc, you have previously used write access. Then go with italics or bold

... Paste your hook in *Ansible playbook*.
... For a post-migration hook, follow the same steps in the *Post migration hook* section.
... At the top of the tab, click *Update hooks*.
... In a terminal, enter following command:
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... In a terminal, enter following command:
... In a terminal, enter the following command:

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Looks good, but there are too many wee mistakes

@RichardHoch RichardHoch force-pushed the cnv_dest_provider_mig_network branch from b60a1ea to a046a74 Compare December 16, 2024 08:20
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