Update use cases.

README.md

@@ -17,33 +17,31 @@ If this proposal stands, we plan to extend the [Background Sync](https://wicg.gi
 specification to describe this ability as well, and move the document to the standardization track.
 
 ## Use cases
-  Many apps benefit from updating their state and content when the device has
-  network connectivity, before the user navigates to their web page.
-  This skips the otherwise slow and laggy experience that the
-  user would otherwise go through if the app was being updated while being used.
-
-  The app can also delight its users by presenting the most up to date content,
-  right away at launch time.
-
-  Here are two main types of updates that are beneficial if done
-  opportunistically:
+  Consider a website that's offline enabled. It uses service workers to provide an almost
+  instantaneous loading experience. However, it may have to show stale content and switch it out
+  shortly after the user visits the site, once it has downloaded the latest content.
+  This app will benefit from updating its state and content when the device has network
+  connectivity, *before* the user navigates to its web page. This way, it can delight its users by
+  presenting the most up to date content, right away at launch time.
+
+  Here are two main types of updates that are beneficial if done opportunistically:
   1. Updating state:
      This is the data required for the correct functioning of the app. Examples:
      a. Updated search index for a search app.
-     b. Synchronized game scores for the user and her friends for a gaming app.
+     b. Synchronized game scores for the user and their friends for a gaming app.
      c. Updated icons after a UI overhaul of a web app.
 
   2. Updating content:
-     Periodic content producers can push content to user devices,
-     to be consumed at a later, more convenient time. Examples:
-     a. Fresh articles from news and Manga sites.
-     b. Synchronized photos from other devices, in a photo app.
-     c. New songs from their favorited artists, in a songs app.
-
-  Currently, the Push API enables this, but it requires setting up a server
-  that speaks the Web Push protocol, and is GDPR compliant. Additional tasks
-  like resource and certificate management add complexity to this approach.
-  Periodic Background Sync offers a simpler, more accessible solution.
+     Periodic content producers can push content to user devices, to be consumed at a later, more
+     convenient time. Examples:
+     a. Fresh articles from news sites.
+     b. List of badges the user has earned, in a fitness app.
+     c. List of new songs from their favorited artists, in a songs app, to be downloaded using
+        Background Fetch if the user clicks on "Download".
+
+  Currently, the Push API enables this, but it requires setting up a server that speaks the Web
+  Push protocol, and is GDPR compliant. Additional tasks like resource management add complexity to
+  this approach. Periodic Background Sync offers a simpler, more accessible solution.
 
 ## Why do we care?
   * todo