Merge pull request #633 from Yubico/equijano21-patch-1

minor edits and suggestions for 1.9 RNs

Yubico.YubiKey/docs/users-manual/getting-started/whats-new.md

@@ -20,13 +20,13 @@ Here you can find all of the updates and release notes for published versions of
 
 ### 1.9.0
 
-Release date: October 12th, 2023
+Release date: October 13th, 2023
 
 Features:
 
 - **FIDO2 PIN Config**. The PIN config feature, if supported by the
   connected YubiKey, is a set of operations: set the minimum PIN
-  length, force a PIN change, and returning a minimum PIN length to a
+  length, force a PIN change, and return a minimum PIN length to a
   relying party.
 
 - **FIDO2 GUI option for sample code**. There is now a version of the
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Features:
   only in a Windows environment.
 
 - **SCP03 CMAC added to CryptographyProviders**. SCP03 operations rely
-  on AES-CMAC, and starting in this release, will call on the
+  on the AES-CMAC algorithm, and, starting in this release, they will call on the
   CryptogrphyProviders class to retrieve an implementation. The default
   implementation uses OpenSSL.
 
@@ -45,11 +45,11 @@ Features:
   sets, and removing key sets. This is done using the new Scp03Session
   class.
 
-- **SCP03 architecture**. How to build an SCP03 connection was updated.
-  the previous method (in the YubiKeyDevice class) is now deprecated and
-  the new method simply requires passing in the SCP03 key set to the
+- **SCP03 architecture**. The process for building an SCP03 connection was updated.
+  The previous method ([Yubico.YubiKey.YubiKeyDeviceExtensions.WithScp03()](xref:Yubico.YubiKey.YubiKeyDeviceExtensions.WithScp03%28Yubico.YubiKey.YubiKeyDevice%2CYubico.YubiKey.Scp03.StaticKeys%29)) is now deprecated, and
+  the new method ([Yubico.YubiKey.IYubiKeyDevice.ConnectScp03()](xref:Yubico.YubiKey.IYubiKeyDevice.ConnectScp03%28Yubico.YubiKey.YubiKeyApplication%2CYubico.YubiKey.Scp03.StaticKeys%29)) simply requires passing in the SCP03 key set to the
   PivSession constructor. It is also possible to build an
-  IYubiKeyConnection that uses SCP03.
+  IYubiKeyConnection that uses SCP03 via [Yubico.YubiKey.Piv.PivSession()](xref:Yubico.YubiKey.Piv.PivSession.%23ctor%28Yubico.YubiKey.IYubiKeyDevice%2CYubico.YubiKey.Scp03.StaticKeys%29).
 
 - **SCP03 documentation**. The User's Manual article on SCP03 was
   updated to provide more comprehensive information.