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         The device is being used for a video call web service. It can be folded
-        into the laptop <a>posture</a> to enable a hands-free when placed on a
-        surface. The UA detects the posture and the UI is enhanced. Similar
-        examples can be drafted for content to adapt to any posture. See the
-        <a href=
+        into the laptop <a>posture</a> to enable a hands-free experience when
+        placed on a surface. The UA detects the posture and the UI is enhanced.
+        Similar examples can be drafted for content to adapt to any posture.
+        See the <a href=
         "https://github.com/SamsungInternet/Explainers/blob/master/Foldables/FoldState.md#key-scenarios">
         explainer</a> for other key scenarios.
       </p><img src="images/example-videocall.svg" alt=