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Author: russelljtdyer

articles/tools/start/index.adoc

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 = Vaadin Start
 
-image::_images/example-project.png[An example project built with the Vaadin Start online interface]
+The Vaadin Start online interface allows you to manage, configure and download the core of a functional Vaadin projects. You can use them as a starting point to create your own Vaadin applications. Even more so, they allow you to do several fundamental things, easily.
 
-https://start.vaadin.com?preset=latest[Open Vaadin Start, role="button primary water"]
+image::_images/example-project.png[Project Built with Vaadin Start Online Interface]
 
-The Vaadin Start online interface allows you to manage, configure and download the core of a functional Vaadin projects. At a minimum, you can use them as a starting point to create your own Vaadin applications. Even more so, it allows you easily to do several fundamental things.
+https://start.vaadin.com?preset=latest[Open Vaadin Start, role="button primary water"]
 
 
 == Manage Projects
 
-Vaadin Start allows you to work on multiple projects. You can see a list of your projects in the `My Projects` section. You can download your project from there, directly.
+With Vaadin Start, you can work on multiple projects. You can find a list of your projects in the `My Projects` section. You can download your project from there, directly.
 
 .Projects List
-image::_images/my-projects.png[height=75%, width=75%, List of User Projects]
+image::_images/my-projects.png[height=75%, width=75%, List of Projects]
 
 
 == Add Views
 
 Vaadin Start allows you to add several views to your project. You can select the initial content of each view from a list of more than fifteen Flow and Hilla templates. For example, you can include views based on the Master-Detail template, which can be used to manage an entity's data.
 
+The screenshot here shows the Vaadin Start UI, with the Add View dialog open, showing the Master-Detail template selected:
+
 .Master-Detail Template
-image::_images/master-detail-template.png[Vaadin Start UI, with the Add View dialog open, showing the Master-Detail template selected]
+image::_images/master-detail-template.png[Vaadin Start UI with Add View and Master-Detail Template Selected]
 
-You can then add and modify JPA entities. These entities are downloaded with the generated project, along with their corresponding Spring Data classes, such as the [classname]`Repository` and [classname]`Service`.
+You can then add and modify JPA entities. These entities are downloaded with the generated project, along with their corresponding Spring Data classes, such as the [classname]`Repository` and [classname]`Service`. You can see this in the screenshot here:
 
 .View Access Control Setup
 image::_images/edit-entity.png[Edit Entities, width=100%]
@@ -38,7 +40,7 @@ image::_images/edit-entity.png[Edit Entities, width=100%]
 
 You can also configure security and control access. A login view is added for you if you configure one or more views that require a logged-in user. 
 
-In this screenshot you can see the Vaadin Start UI, with the view details popover open, showing the options for the View Access control:
+In this screenshot, you can see the Vaadin Start UI with the view details popover open, showing the options for the View Access control:
 
 .View Access Control Setup
 image::_images/security-setup.png[Vaadin Start UI with View Details, width=60%]
@@ -51,7 +53,7 @@ Vaadin Start lets you easily change the look and feel of the application. Specif
 This next screenshot shows the Vaadin Start UI with the Theme sidebar active, showing the color palette options:
 
 .Theme Customization
-image::_images/customize-theming.png[Vaadin Start UI with Theme Sidebar, width=40%]
+image::_images/customize-theming.png[Vaadin Start UI with Theme Sidebar and Color Palettes, width=40%]
 
 
 == Technical Configuration
@@ -69,5 +71,6 @@ image::_images/download-dialog.png[Vaadin Start UI with Download Project Dialog]
 To start with a simplified project template -- without adding and configuring any views -- you can configure and download a "Hello World" starter from the landing page of Vaadin Start.
 
 This screenshot shows the configuration options for Hello World starters:
+
 .Hello World Starters
 image::_images/hello-world-starters.png[Hello World Starters, width=60%]