move 'mentored' to be more clean in meaning

matthewfeickert · matthewfeickert · commit 380421a2f9f9 · 2024-10-03T23:37:14.000-05:00
diff --git a/talk.md b/talk.md
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ Ongoing integration work into ATLAS Athena
 .kol-1-2[
 .large[
 * Tooling ecosystem is proving approachable and performant
-* Enabling university students to implement versions of the AGC by themselves with mentorship in a Jupyter notebook
+* Enabling mentored university students to implement versions of the AGC by themselves in a Jupyter notebook
 * ATLAS IRIS-HEP Fellow Denys Klekots's [AGC project using .bold[ATLAS open data]](https://indico.cern.ch/event/1455396/contributions/6126406/) ([implementation on GitHub](https://github.com/iris-hep/agc-physlite))
 * Simplified version of [IRIS-HEP AGC top reconstruction challenge](https://agc.readthedocs.io/) using 2025+2016 Run 2 Monte Carlo from the 2024 .bold[ATLAS open data] release
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`356`	`356`	`.kol-1-2[`
`357`	`357`	`.large[`
`358`	`358`	`* Tooling ecosystem is proving approachable and performant`
`359`		`-* Enabling university students to implement versions of the AGC by themselves with mentorship in a Jupyter notebook`
	`359`	`+* Enabling mentored university students to implement versions of the AGC by themselves in a Jupyter notebook`
`360`	`360`	`* ATLAS IRIS-HEP Fellow Denys Klekots's [AGC project using .bold[ATLAS open data]](https://indico.cern.ch/event/1455396/contributions/6126406/) ([implementation on GitHub](https://github.com/iris-hep/agc-physlite))`
`361`	`361`	`* Simplified version of [IRIS-HEP AGC top reconstruction challenge](https://agc.readthedocs.io/) using 2025+2016 Run 2 Monte Carlo from the 2024 .bold[ATLAS open data] release`
`362`	`362`	`]`