changed header and logo, proof read features list

Author: kombos

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@@ -14,9 +14,10 @@ <h2 class="section-heading">Features of this DApp</h2>
                     <i class="fa fa-4x fa-random wow bounceIn text-primary"></i>
                     <h4>Most Powerful 'Provable Random' in Blockchain History</h4>
                     <p class="text-muted text-justify small">Multiprizer uses the most sophisticated Provable Random
-                        Number to generate winner - Ledger based random of Oraclize, with on-chain proof verification.
-                        This makes compromising the 'random' by a malicious player or block miner practically
-                        impossible. <a href="https://docs.oraclize.it/#security-deepdive-advanced-data-sources">Read More</a></p>
+                        Number currently known, to generate winner - Ledger based random of Oraclize, with on-chain
+                        proof verification. This creates purest 'random' to select winners from the strategic lot.
+                        impossible. <a href="https://docs.oraclize.it/#security-deepdive-advanced-data-sources">Read
+                            More</a></p>
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@@ -25,27 +26,28 @@ <h4>Most Powerful 'Provable Random' in Blockchain History</h4>
                     <h4>Highest Level of Decentralization for robust and tamper-proof Gameplay</h4>
                     <p class="text-muted text-justify small">This DApp is built with game parameters such as DirectPlay
                         and a fixed significant house edge, which make sure that the game cannot be controlled or
-                        manipulated by any party – neither a malicious player, nor rogue miners, not even the admin or
+                        manipulated by any party – neither malicious players, nor rogue miners, not even the admin or
                         creator of this game. <a href="https://docs.multiprizer.io/decentralization">Read More</a></p>
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-                    <h4>Fairness of Gameplay implementing revision of token purchase</h4>
+                    <h4>Fairness of Gameplay implementing 'Undo' of token purchase</h4>
                     <p class="text-muted text-justify small">The game tokens, once purchased, can be undone by the
-                        ‘revert’ feature in which all the purchased tokens are cancelled, and the token value returned
-                        to the player. This is applicable at any point in time as long as the timer for that round has
-                        not expired.</p>
+                        ‘revert’ feature in which all the player's purchased tokens are cancelled, and the token value
+                        refunded to the player. This is applicable at any point in time as long as the timer for that
+                        round has not expired.</p>
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                     <h4>Play without visiting the site using 'DirectPlay' mode</h4>
                     <p class="text-muted text-justify small">Players don’t even have to visit the DApp site to play. One
-                        can send the token value of a specific game from their Ethereum Wallet to the Contract Address
-                        and the player participation gets auto-confirmed. <a href="https://docs.multiprizer.io/directplay">Read More</a>
+                        can send a token value multiple of a specific game, from their Ethereum Wallet to the Contract
+                        Address, and the player participation gets auto-confirmed. <a
+                            href="https://docs.multiprizer.io/directplay">Read More</a>
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@@ -57,8 +59,10 @@ <h4>Play without visiting the site using 'DirectPlay' mode</h4>
                     <h4>Emphasis on Strategy rather than ‘Random’ based outcome</h4>
                     <p class="text-muted text-justify small">Games are designed such that there is a lot of leverage on
                         how you play, rather than dependence on chance, to maximizes your outcome of victory. The per
-                        token probability itself is extremely low, teamed with option to purchase and revert at will,
-                        brings strategy as key to victory. <a href="https://docs.multiprizer.io/strategy-over-luck">Read More</a></a>
+                        token win probability itself is extremely high, teamed with option to purchase and revert at
+                        will, brings strategy as key to victory. <a
+                            href="https://docs.multiprizer.io/strategy-over-luck">Read
+                            More</a></a>
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@@ -67,19 +71,21 @@ <h4>Emphasis on Strategy rather than ‘Random’ based outcome</h4>
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                     <h4>Immaculately secure Smart Contract code providing uncompromising gameplay</h4>
                     <p class="text-muted text-justify small">The Smart Contract follows best-in-class secure methodology
-                        derived from various top standards such as Consensys, OpenZeppelin etc. which prevents attacks
-                        such as re-entrancy, overflow/underflow etc. The contract is also publicly verified, providing
-                        full transparency of game algorithm. <a href="https://docs.multiprizer.io/security">Read More</a></p>
+                        derived from various top safety standards such as Consensys, OpenZeppelin etc. which prevents
+                        attacks such as re-entrancy, overflow/underflow etc. The contract is also publicly verified,
+                        providing
+                        full transparency of game algorithm. <a href="https://docs.multiprizer.io/security">Read
+                            More</a></p>
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                     <h4>MegaPrize category to pick a lucky winner from historical participants</h4>
-                    <p class="text-muted text-justify small">The MegaPrize, when activated by admin, uses part of
-                        admin’s edge to create a lucky draw for participants who have at least ones of any Game Board,
-                        without reverting. The winner is again chosen using provable random like game rounds MegaPrize
-                        amount automatically credited. <a href="https://docs.multiprizer.io/megaprize">Read More</a></p>
+                    <p class="text-muted text-justify small">The MegaPrize uses part of admin’s edge to create a lucky
+                        draw for participants who have played any Game Board at least once, without reverting. The winner is
+                        again chosen using provable random like game rounds & MegaPrize amount automatically credited. <a
+                            href="https://docs.multiprizer.io/megaprize">Read More</a></p>
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@@ -88,7 +94,7 @@ <h4>MegaPrize category to pick a lucky winner from historical participants</h4>
                     <h4>Consistency of Win Probability and Uninterrupted Game Perpetuity maintained</h4>
                     <p class="text-muted text-justify small">The games cannot be obstructed in any manner while the
                         round is still on. The game locks can only be implemented by admin on completion of game rounds,
-                        so does contract kill. Also, to maintain winning probability, new game boards are added instead
+                        so does contract kill. Also, to maintain consistent win probability, new game boards are added instead
                         of increasing total tokens for a specific game. </p>
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