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# Why? 🤷
-Not all applications are free.
-There are some that can be acquired through
-a [one time purchase](https://git-fork.com/buy).
-There are others
-that are [subscription-based](https://www.crunchyroll.com/welcome).
-Regardless of the type, all of these share one thing in common:
-**they use payment processing platforms/gateways
-to manage transactions**.
+Sadly, not all applications can be "free";
+The software engineers that build them need to be paid
+and the servers that host them aren't free either.
+
+Some apps are sold via **one time purchase**.
+Others are subscription-based.
+Regardless of the type,
+all of these share one thing in common:
+**they use payment processing gateways
+to collect funds**.
In any current application,
-knowing how processing payments *work*
-and how they *can* be implemented
+knowing how processing payments work
+and how they can be implemented
is important,
as it affects the bottom-line
of the project/application/company.
# What 💭
-Let's think for a minute of what happens
+Consider what happens
when we purchase something online.
-Assume we want to [buy Postico2](https://eggerapps.at/postico2/),
+Assume we want to buy a product online
+e.g:
+[Postico2](https://eggerapps.at/postico2/),
a PostgreSQL database editor.
-If we click the `Buy Postico 2` button,
-we are redirected to a page where we can buy a license.
-
-
-
If we proceed to payment,
we can pay with a credit card or Paypal.
@@ -53,7 +52,7 @@ But how was this implemented?
Is there any service behind this?
For those with a keen eye,
you might have noticed
-that in the upprt third of the screen,
+that in the upper third of the screen,
it seems that this transaction
is being handled by
[`MyCommerce.com`](https://www.mycommerce.com/).
@@ -69,24 +68,22 @@ to provide different ways of users to pay
and integrate payments *seamlessly* in our applications.
But, as you may be aware,
-there are several other SaaS providers,
-such as [`Stripe`](https://stripe.com/en-pt)
-or [`Square`](https://squareup.com/us/en/).
-Each one of these may differ from each others.
-
-But we are getting ahead of ourselves.
-We need to clarify some concepts before moving forward.
+there are several other Payment processing providers,
+such as
+[`PayPal`](https://developer.paypal.com/api/rest/),
+[`Stripe`](https://stripe.com)
+or
+[`Square`](https://squareup.com/us/en/).
-Ready to start? 🏁
-## How payment works
+## How Payment Works
Let's start with an analogy.
-Imagine you want to send a parcel to your father.
+Imagine you want to send a parcel to someone.
1. You first drop it in a DHL (or UPS) drop-off point.
-2. DHL collects the package and transports the parcel to your father.
+2. DHL collects the package and transports the parcel.
3. Once the delivery is complete,
-a confirmation e-mail is sent to you and your father.
+a confirmation e-mail is sent to you and the recipient.
Think of the DHL distribution network
as analogous to a **payment processor**.
@@ -103,34 +100,34 @@ into the merchant's bank account.
So, a **payment processor** functions as an intermediary
between the customer's party
-(which consists of the user and his bank)
-and the merchant's
-(which consists of the merchant and his bank).
+(which consists of the buyer and their bank)
+and the merchant
+(which consists of the merchant and their bank).
It is the entity responsible for communicating
between both parties in the transaction.
Meanwhile, the **payment gateway**
is a *point of sale* for online payments.
-Similarly to when a customer swipes his card
+Similarly to when a customer swipes their card
on a physical credit card terminal,
online stores need a gateway to securely collect
the customer's payment information.
-So *payment gateway is basically a virtual terminal,
+So *payment gateway is a virtual terminal,
and functions as a point of sale*.
This whole process of online payment
usually assumes the merchant
-has a [**merchant account**](https://www.investopedia.com/terms/m/merchant-account.asp).
+has a
+[**merchant account**](https://www.investopedia.com/terms/m/merchant-account.asp).
A merchant account is simply
a type of business bank account
that *allows a business
to receive credit card
and electronic transactions*.
-Do note that the terms `"payment processor"` and `"payment gateway"`
+> **Note**: the terms `"payment processor"` and `"payment gateway"`
usually fall under the same term - `payment processor`.
-This is because they work together in achieving
-the payment processing.
+This is because they work together to handle payment processing.
So if you see platforms like `Stripe`
being mentioned as a "payment processor",
it's because it offers both `payment gateway` and `payment processor`