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xml/security_pam.xml

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<chapter xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its" xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0" xml:id="cha-pam">
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<title>Authentication with PAM</title>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Learn about Linuxs modular authentication mechanism and configuring PAM modules for secure user access</meta>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Learn how Linux uses PAM modules for flexible authentication and how to configure them for secure and centralized user access</meta>
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Linux uses PAM (pluggable authentication modules) in the authentication

xml/security_polkit.xml

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<title>The &pk; authentication framework</title>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Configure your Linux system with fine-grained access control using PK, granting specific privileges to users or groups without administrator access</meta>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Configure your Linux system with fine-grained access control using Polkit, granting specific privileges to users or groups without administrator access</meta>
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&pk; is an authentication framework used in graphical Linux desktop

xml/security_ssh.xml

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<title>Securing network operations with OpenSSH</title>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Secure network operations using OpenSSHs features for remote administration, file transfers, and secure tunneling of insecure protocols</meta>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Secure network operations using OpenSSH features for remote administration, file transfers and secure tunneling of insecure protocols</meta>
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OpenSSH is the SSH (secure shell) implementation that ships with &productname;,

xml/security_stig.xml

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<chapter xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its" xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" os="sles" version="5.0" xml:id="cha-security-stig">
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Learn about the STIG process, including its importance for system security, and implement DISA-approved STIGs hardening guidelines to minimize attacks</meta>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Learn about the STIG process, including its importance for system security, and implement DISA-approved STIG hardening guidelines to minimize attacks</meta>
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<title>Hardening &sle; with &stiga;</title>
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<dm:docmanager xmlns:dm="urn:x-suse:ns:docmanager">
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<dm:translation>yes</dm:translation>

xml/security_sysctl.xml

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<chapter xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its" xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0" xml:id="cha-sec-sysctl">
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<title>Improving network security with <command>sysctl</command> variables</title>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Configure your Linux systems security settings using recommended sysctl variables to prevent IP spoofing and denial-of-service attacks</meta>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Configure your Linux system's security settings using recommended sysctl variables to prevent IP spoofing and denial-of-service attacks</meta>
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<dm:docmanager xmlns:dm="urn:x-suse:ns:docmanager">
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xml/security_vpnserver_yast.xml

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xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink"
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version="5.0" xml:id="sec-security-yastvpn">
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Use YaSTs built-in tools to set up either a VPN server or client for secure communication with various devices</meta>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Use YaST's built-in tools to set up either a VPN server or client for secure communication with various devices</meta>
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<title>Setting up a VPN server or client using &yast;</title>
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xml/security_yast2_security.xml

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<chapter xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its" xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0" xml:id="cha-security-yast-security">
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<title>Configuring security settings with &yast;</title>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Configure security settings for &amp;productname; through the YaST Security Centers central control panel</meta>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Configure login, password, boot and file permission settings through YaST’s Security Center central control panel</meta>
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xml/sle_admin_intro.xml

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<preface xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its" xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0" xml:id="preface-administration">
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<title>Preface</title>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Learn how to navigate and understand the conventions used in this documentation, including file paths, directory names, environment variables, commands</meta>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Learn how to navigate and understand the conventions used in this documentation, including file paths, directory names, environment variables and commands</meta>
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xml/sle_update_backporting.xml

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<title>Backports of source code</title>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Learn about backporting, version comparison, and security best practices for SUSE and SLES (SUSE Linux Enterprise Server) products</meta>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Learn about backporting, version comparison, and security best practices for SUSE and SLES products</meta>
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xml/sle_update_finish.xml

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<title>Finishing the upgrade</title>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Follow these rules strictly Configure your system after upgrading by following the necessary setup procedures, then verify that everything is functioning</meta>
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<meta name="description" its:translate="yes">Complete your upgrade by checking for old packages, reviewing configuration files, updating Python, and ensuring file systems are fully supported</meta>
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After the upgrade, you need to perform some additional tasks. The following

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